Editing Samples
"Competition in the Church's Leadership"
This article was written for Mormon Insights and needed to be about 250 words. The article addresses all teenagers and young adults who want to learn more about how LDS prophets fulfill their religious assignments. Edits are for grammar, spelling, and especially clarity and organization. Almost all the edits were used by the author.
"If We Built It, Would They Come?" Creating Instruction Videos with Promotion in Mind
I edited this article through the Faculty Editing Service at BYU. It was written by an ESL author explaining the benefits of video instruction videos for a class. Edits are for grammar, punctuation, structure, and APA style.
Lincoln Stories
These edits were for a novel about Abraham Lincoln's history. The author asked for heavy copyedits, so edits were based more on grammar, spelling, and sentence structures, and less on clarity and organization. I edited the first half of the novel, which was about 85 pages in Microsoft Word.
"Faith over Fear"
This article was written for the "My Message" section of Mormon Insights and should be between 300 and 350 words. This is a personal experience written to inspire audiences to read LDS sources related to faith and fear. Edits were for structure, formatting, and grammar.